Thursday, April 5, 2007
Nordstrom Wikipedia Edit #2
My second edit of Wikipedia’s “Nordstrom” article corrected many grammatical errors in three of the article’s sections. One of the corrections I made was adding necessary commas after introductory clauses. There were also several compound sentences that either lacked commas or had unnecessary ones, which I corrected. There was one sentence that was originally repetitive because the word “about” was used twice, so I replaced one with the word “regarding.” In addition, there was a run-on sentence, which I separated into two sentences. I must admit I am quite embarrassed because I spelled “repetitive” wrong in the comment section beside my one of my edits.
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