Wednesday, April 4, 2007

Lilly Pulitzer Wikipedia Edit #2

For my second edit of Wikipedia’s ”Lilly Pulitzer” article, I corrected numerous grammar errors. There were two introductions to sentences that began with “In (a certain year)” that lacked a comma after the phrase, so I made those additions. There were also multiple comma and quotation errors. Originally, the period or comma was outside of the quotation marks surrounding a phrase, so I made corrections by placing either the comma or period inside the quotation marks. The article also contained a few wordy sentences, so I deleted unnecessary words. Unfortunately, I forgot to check the box at the end of the edit page stating that this was only a minor edit.

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